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Old 11-22-2008, 11:09 PM
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Cool hmmmm
While Mary was traveling through the East Coast she stayed overnight in New York, Pennsylvania, and Maine.

or . . .

Exploring the East Coast, Mary stayed overnight in New York, Pennsylvania, and Maine.

Stronger sentence I think.
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