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Old 11-22-2008, 11:15 PM
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Originally Posted by njgranny View Post
While Mary was traveling through the East Coast she stayed overnight in New York, Pennsylvania, and Maine.

There should be a comma between Coast and she.

While Mary was travelling through the East Coast, she stayed ........



AGREE - but then I bombed the business letter writing quiz last week.


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