When I first looked at it, my reaction was that I did not like it, as it looked "fake" or "manufactured", but I keep coming back and looking as I enjoy your picture taking eye from other posts.
As I look at it more, the colors and textures almost give it a painting feel which I like, but the yellows still feel a bit strong.
I can honestly say, I am not sure about this one, but I always enjoy looking at your pictures. How is that for a waffling assessment
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In the end it comes down to how you feel about it, maybe you can share some insight as to what you were going for after collecting more reaction. If photography were measured like golf, my photography handicap would be a 25, so insights from "single digit photographers" is always interesting.