Talk of The Villages Florida - Rentals, Entertainment & More
Talk of The Villages Florida - Rentals, Entertainment & More
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CROSSROAD COMMONS not LEISUREVILLE
As my bio states I am a former English teacher, turned technology teacher. (and yes I also danced professionally on B'way very briefly and then taught dance).
I am now considering writing a mini novel (maybe a technology driven one) based on my research about 55 active adult communities. I plan on coming to The Villages in December through March, and I am asking for your help. I am writing the novel in the style of Danielle Steele, I know for the men maybe "bleh", but for me it is just a fun project, not meant to be anything other than LIGHT reading.I decided to call it CROSSROAD COMMONS I read LEISUREVILLE and I think it doesn't paint the true picture of what I see here on TOTV, many people of my generation who are just kind, informative and helpful to each other on many levels. I find the author's blog (AB) often negative towards generational positions ahead and behind him. I am looking for the following (yes I will credit your story if used in the forward):
and anything else you can think of. It is a work of fiction, although I have made a list of the recommended contractors, services, and purchasing pre-owned versus new for personal use. I am thinking of using Kickstarter on Facebook, and perhaps making it somehow related to the 55 plus crowd on Facebook, not sure where the plot will be just yet, but it will be very LIGHT reading. Thanking you in advance for your help, if you wish to relate a story you can PM me. I think TOTV is in one word WONDERFUL. As one who corrected 125 essays a week for MCAS prep, I think the writer's true personality or voice is reflected in their posts, and so many of the regulars here are truly wonderful and inspirational people. Jann
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Can I be.....
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You might add a category for parents with chicks who have fallen on hard times, and have come to nest in The Villages. More than you might think.
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RVRoadie and JJ
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Roadie, I do have one widowed character with 2 come home to roost again, if you have a personal reflection or know of someone just PM with brief info, I am a widow so I can relate to some widow issues
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Once I became familiar with TV I had intended to write a few mysteries about the place. I have a few ideas and plots in mind but it will take time to familiarize myself with places and customs. Who knows, Jannd228...maybe you and I can compete for the top spot on the Best Sellers List.
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maybe
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Sounds interesting.
You could add a section on how you deceided to move to a 55+ community |
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thanks
will do
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This is not exactly pet vs. the FL environment but it is related.
This just happened this morning at Doggie Doo Run Run (DDRR).
The employees at DDRR pick up dog poop after the dog owners are supposed to mark it with various wire or plastic flags of various colors. The colors of the flags are white, orange, red, pink, and a very few blue. I had taken my dog Sport into the big dog section after first having taken him to the small dog section where I had got to socializing with a near neighbor from the Villages and only saw my dog poop from quite a distance. I looked around for the doggie doo in the company of my Villages' near neighbor but could not find it but felt obligated to look and mark any unmarked poop that caught my eye. There is frequently unmarked dog feces in all the DDRR sections I use. When I got to the big dog section with my chihuahua/terrier mix I was still on the look out for various unmarked doggie business. I found one that was unmarked but had to look away and back again because I saw the poop move. The dog Number 2 moved again and I thought that I was losing my mind. I looked at it for a full minute and it seemed to be dancing from side to side doing some kind of skit out of one of the very strange Cartoon Channel creations or perhaps from South Park. Gathering courage I stuck the poop with a wire pole with a red flag and pushed the poop about a foot aside. There where the poop had been I saw a rather large black beetle of some kind who seemed to be missing his or her lunch of dog waste. I stuck the red flag's pole into the ground near the poop and moved on. This was not anywhere now near the beetle nor the poop as I did not want anyone else seeing the dancing poop in case one of the more senior dog owners or the DDRR employees would get surprised and have a heart attack nor think themselves going crazy seeing some poop doing an imitation of one of the Villagers dancing at karaoke night at Havana Country Club. Last edited by Taltarzac725; 10-08-2010 at 02:30 PM. |
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love it
good one Talzerac, keep posting stories, this is going to be fun, something to show how human we all are no matter the age or location
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Rough Draft
this is a blog book, a creative writing project I used to do with my students if you want to read it you can PM me and I will send you the link;
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ideas
thanks Baylor,
anyone else have funny stories, ideas, or frog concepts, started to write yesterday, it is VERY rough, do not want to give wrong ideas about TV, I visited last spring and am hooked, health issues delay my purchasing but plan to be there soon PM or post, thank you to all, everyone should know how kind you all are here Jann
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ideas
I should have explained this better, I am writing a blog novel similar to what I did with my students. Each day we would post on the discussion board ideas to put in the novel for the day.
I enjoy reading the posts here, no this is NOT going to be published for money, it is just to keep me going as I recuperate from chemo I am undergoing, it keeps me focused on something else besides the pain. I have gotten some great background stories for characters, Taltarzac posted a funny story about DDRR that I am going to work in. If interested just post something, love the posts by Gracie, can't wait to meet her. Love the confusion about the feral cats, working that in, the sobbing about eating ice cream (we have all done that one), the problems with contractors and services, etc. So feel free to post anything you feel would be of interest. If you wish to read the rough draft PM me I will send you the link, or if you would prefer to tell me a story PM me. Setting is a place similar to TV, Thanksgiving through New Year's Day, two main characters, combination Danielle Steel and Sue Grafton, like I said for fun. Thank you to all who post here, I look forward to reading what you write daily. You kept my spirits up all summer. Jann
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Count me in for sure! I'd love to read it . . .
What about the story of someone who moved to TV for 7 mos, LOVED it, but moved back & realized it was the worst mistake of her life? Betty
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